Sunday, November 30, 2008

Devastation To Discovery - You're left stranger no longer

Annotations: Please read carefully the annotations before the poem; or else it could be confounding mainly due to:
1) Poem that eyes to depict a rarely discussed scenario of virtual intimacy
2)Overshadowed and forbidden issue
3) Mild analogy of wars and weapons.. ..
4)Optimization of different styled writing
It has been intended to display the graphical picture that talks about a relationship established and fostered in the world of internet. The world that is not as substantial, and not always to be relied on due to the massive trivia led by lies or impersonation issues. But here, he falls for her!!! loves her and wants to pull her out to the reality off the internet.
But later finds out pulling her out isnt easy, as the name she told him wasnt real, her address wasnt real, her email address wasnt real either, neither were her friends or family or her age that she told him were real. And on the top, she disappears on him.. leaving him nowhere to go.Despite this, he's not ready to give her up, amid her LIES (Tremendous barriers) and hurt heart, regardless of the situation of "NO TRACE" he establishes a aggressive motivation for her "Discovery".
The weapons he had were "dedication towards his motivation", "determination", "fury", "jealousy" and highly sharp arsenal "LOVE" to fight against barriers of her lies, situation of no trace, making his way out of darkness and to reach her "Discovery"Abstractly, When he found out she was a complete lie, he was the victim of "Devastation" but the same "Devastation" is also something took him to her pleasant "Discovery"
I hope it makes sense..
Devastation To Discovery - You're left stranger no longer
Virtual closeness, words reflecting profound emotional vulnerability - never adequately suffice
Survival confined to the trivial realm, desires to have you belonged and passion alpined sky
Motivation and passion fusing together emerging obsession- establishment of disaster in the arsenal
Your lies- tremendous barriers; amidst lack of trace- hunting equipments eyed disposal
No loopholes, obsession in growing motion takes wrecking shape rises to "do or die" slogan
Vigor i went, closing my eyes to the remaining world; you being placed in aggressive vision
Tracing you out, initial weapons shot; bew barriers gunned down; vision strike your vague image
Fume upgraded the speed- exploding inquisitiveness , this time rampage hits the pace.
Obstructioins demolished, masks snitched off, curtains no longer avail
Cool breeze blows, fragrance ordor pleasant, peak rage- there defail
Seen you never before yet your appearance - non stranger
Seeding the pip of friendship- spontaneously- you're left stranger no longer.

A Dream Girl

A Dream girl



Waking up with barrenness; days don’t offer contentment

She resides in thoughts; my heart is her planet



Beautiful she is, naïve and inherent are her eyes

Long and though dark, her hair brightens her to shine



She is so mature and is the foundation of rational acts

Essentially she loves me that’s an unconditional fact



The most beautiful lips she has, invites mine to mingle

Coziness radiates to warmth, no paradise exists other than this single



A touch of her persuades captivation to my heart and there, for her I fall

Endorsed by divinity- She’s a rectified Dream girl



"Talking FEW or VERY LESS about the one who awakes the author in his dream. She persuades him to be available at his discovery in the reality, in the real realm. A vague image of her is in the Authors' mind, but discovering her is his vivid romantic Motivation."

Petrifying-Ridiculing-Absurd-Gullible-Yowling-Act

Knowingly ignored your dishonesty, but could have you never refrained
Contiguous you went; strent you led them to, yet never congested

A gradual realisation entices my posture to deterrence
Yet avoids words appear into coherent utterance

Being with you someday was PRIDE, but now takes a cruel twist into Embarrassment
With you gearing up this motion of dishonesty, leaving no zilch for any amendment

Its peak enough now and i cant take it any longer
Evidently you wont stop; might it just optimize brutual devastation if it just foster

Let me end this before it ends nature's beautiful creation, or you end your lies
Or else, at this point - necessarily - effervescent hallucination dies


"Being too naive was a blatant peccadillo"




"Peccadillo", i've loved using this word in this compelling scenerio. This work is not entirely a fiction. Semblence to Author's "then existent" and "coericing" enviornment is asserted.